Thank you bigmojo :)

comparison between the original and this one will always be there :) this cannot match that nor is better than that, its just my attempt :)

Thank you Nupur :)

let me check with Sulekha and find out what happened to the comment :)

Spk

I had posted a comment on this and it vanished somewhere...

yes this has many meanings.

loved the last two lines.

keep writing

Nupur

spk, i like the what you have to say but I cannot say the same thing about the presentation. It seems like you did not have the grit of the sculpturer who gave us that 'waiting man' to chisel and polish your piece of art.  :-))

Thank you Sonali :)

Its simply beautiful...simple subtle and touching

Thank you Rajee :)


the lines you pointed are the lines which are the reason for the double lines.
if you look at it from a single perspective, they are bound to be "incorrect" just like you have pointed out.

but dont do that, try to look at it from multiple angles :)

Thank you npan :)

very beautifully written.. i quite like the way you started and used the picture to your advantage...very nice

A good accusation --but somehow you seem to have lost control of the theme you had. you say you do not know how you lost the game---then go on to accuse' her' for distraction and turning VICTORY INTO DEFEAT. I have not understood your 'DOUBLE MEANING JOKE'. 
Look at it:-
>>>>>>>>a shiver runs through my spine>>>>>>>>>i try not to panic>>>>>>>>>>i don't know how I lost the game>>>>>>>>>I was on the way to victory(i thought)>>>>>>>>>>I saw you out of the corner of the eye
And now you say------the ball is in your court---when you have already lost the game------           

  Are you still hopeful of continuation of the game?

  You might like to reconcile the duplicity involved. It is