i dont know how i lost the game
it was secured in a safe place
away from the prying eyes
i thou...
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i dont know how i lost the game
it was secured in a safe place
away from the prying eyes
i thought i had mastered the art of keeping things safe
i thought i was safe
i thought i was secure
when i still think about it now,
a shiver runs through my spine
and i try to run for the nearest shelter
i try not to panic
afterall, its just a phase
its just like a stupid commercial that comes in between the blockbuster movie
just when the plot gets interesting, the ad spoils it all
my game was at its magical best
i was on the way to victory ( i thought)
safe and sound
until that final moment
when i saw you
out of the corner of my eye
i lost myself at that critical moment
the moment when my whole life was turned upside down
for good or for bad, i dont know
i have lost the game
and the ball is in your court
now, i sit here
in the corner
outside the building where i saw you
still thinking about you
patiently waiting for you to come again
and cast your magic
the magic of your eyes
that has turned me into a stone sculpture
now has to cast its spell once again
and bring me back to life
i wait here patiently
i wait here for eternity
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note: this is my entry to the Content no. #21 that is being conducted by binagupta.
this poem also has 2 meanings :)
originally posted at my poetry site.
just to clarify, the last line is more in tune with the picture and not for anything specific. ;)
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Thank you Madhvi :)
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Wait. Even Ahilya found a Rama to resuccitate her from a stone!
Written really well.
Avinash
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nice twist to the poem... good one :)
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