This is a continuation of the previous poem - I am back
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This is a continuation of the previous poem - I am back
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moving away from the hustle and bustle
i stepped inside
letting my eyes adjust to this dim light
i waited near the entrance
with the music blaring on one corner
a bunch of "drunken" idiots on other
i slowly made my way across the dance floor
to the far corner where you are waiting
clutching a gucci handbag in one hand
an half empty glass of wine in another
i walked towards you
still sleepy and tired
a phone call in the middle of the night
a thousands sobs
and a thousand questions later
i agreed to meet you
so, here i am
standing before you
looking deeply into your eyes
coming closely to the face i once held in my hands
i whisper into your ears
"I love you"
time stands still for a moment
before i continue
"Thank you for good times we had.
now the party is over and the curtain has fallen on us.
A brand new journey awaits and a brand new chapter needs to be written
before this book (life) is finished."
without a wink
i turn around
and walk towards the door
leaving a thousand tears behind
what started with a simple "I love you"
now ends with an another "I love you"
finishing the long chapter that i was (writing) once a part of
i step outside to write a brand new chapter
to start a brand new journey into this newly discovered life
a brand new adventure starts today....
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fortunately there is only one meaning to this :).
this is a reflection of the present
if this one does not make any sense, i advise you to read the previous writing(s) to understand this.
originally published at my poetry website
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hiyaa Spk,
Wow this is just too intricate...u entangled me in a web. Leaving a thousand tears behind...which started with a simple love u and ended with teh same..how true...A new journey, but tears stay..the scars are there..but will tell ya something..if u just let them stay theway they are...these scars mey turn to smiles...not really...but can be remembered as broken memories with love..
loved this one..
fortunaltely I got that one meaning in it
Love,
Ekta
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Spk100,
A very nice and well written continuation... I love the way you finished it, with grace and pride but not too much. Very good indeed.
Cheers, Viv
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