Hey Spk,

Very well written. Many a time from outside we see people and think that what possibly could that person not have. I mean they seem to be so lucky and they might have everything. But that person might actually be like a beggar in paradise as mentioned in your poem.

Can totally relate to what you said. Very well written. I guess every person some where or the other passes through a phase in life where they feel this way.

Good one.

Madhuri

Thanks Cindrella King :)

Lovely one... This poem too has some lights of darkness but well hidden in shine...

with all things that was once mine
looking to regain my lost possessions
i walk slowly in the corridors of heaven
(like a beggar in paradise)

Cindrella King

Thank you Opulence :)

Beautifully written! Very well said.... we are all beggars in God's paradise. God has a purpose, if he closes one door be assured he opens a thousand more.

Thank you very much buddingindian :)

VERY well written.  It was so satisfying to my soul that I will return many times again to experience it repeatedly.  I especially liked the way you described what you were writing at the bottom.  Very rare to see.  Kudos to you for your special style and skill.

Thank you Krishnan Bala :)

It is true many a times ppl do not respond simply because they are not in the same wavelength as the poet :)

As far as possible i try to given an explanation to what i write (sometimes).

Thanks for dropping in.

Dear spk100,
                            I liked the poem and also the import of the same well described. This is a nice attempt as most of the poets come on the screen  with out explaining the meaning when it is not obvious .The mind-set unless in resonance will be able to make vey less impact, and evidenced by the number of fewer responses.

Thank you Poonam :)