a gun shot, a childs cry and a little laughter
a small talk, a big argument and crazy fight
stand...
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a gun shot, a child's cry and a little laughter
a small talk, a big argument and crazy fight
standing patiently
you watch it with amazement
silently wishing for it to stop
yet amazed how stupid everyone can be when
chaos, commotion, violence
take over their sanity
words are violence
the more you talk
the more "insane" you become
the more you try to understand
the less you make out of it
life is one big canvas
with brushes aplenty
we all wait to paint the masterpiece
with the colors we want
amidst all this confusion
we look to standout
by standing on someone else
when you think you had enough
step back from this insane world
move into this darkness
take your time
enjoy the beauty
enjoy the silence
and when the time is right
for you to step back in this psychedelic world
you have a million reasons to rejoice
for you have a life full of rainbows
at every step
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according to dictionary.com, psychedelic is defined as: (of a mental state) characterized by intense and distorted perceptions and hallucinations and feelings of euphoria or sometimes despair
http://dictionary.reference.com/search?q=psychedelic
of or causing extreme changes in the conscious mind, as hallucinations, delusions, intensification of awareness and sensory perception, etc. - http://www.yourdictionary.com/psychedelic
My entry to Meerajay's express yourself content #22
note: at first glance, this is one big meaningless poem. but read it again :)
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Thank you babypink :)
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"words are violence
the more you talk
the more "insane" you become
the more you try to understand
the less you make out of it"
" and when the time is right
for you to step back in this psychedelic world
you have a million reasons to rejoice
for you have a life full of rainbows
at every step"
You really speak 100 man ... Fabulously narrated...I like your way of writing...
well written ...
Cheers,
Babypink!
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Thank you Socrates :)
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Thank you Sudha :)
Ofcourse you cant remain silent all the time. But there are times when keeping silent puts an end to a lot of things :)
Regards
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Hi spk100
My understnding of poetry is pretty limited. But this I found beautiful.!!!
Have a nice day
rgds
socrates
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Yes SPK, I guess the cliche 'Silence is Golden' holds good.
But then sometimes silence can be defeaning too, so it depends on the time and frame of mind to enjoy it.
Good one,
Sudha
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Thank you Bina :)
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spk:
v. novel and original thought process
silence is always an oasis instead of the cacophony of words
beautiful
all the best
bina
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Thank you Ajit :)
That is a huge compliment :)
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words are violence
the more you talk
the more "insane" you become
the more you try to understand
the less you make out of it
these lines I will remember through out and forevver maybe!
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