a gun shot, a childs cry and a little laughter
a small talk, a big argument and crazy fight
stand...
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a gun shot, a child's cry and a little laughter
a small talk, a big argument and crazy fight
standing patiently
you watch it with amazement
silently wishing for it to stop
yet amazed how stupid everyone can be when
chaos, commotion, violence
take over their sanity
words are violence
the more you talk
the more "insane" you become
the more you try to understand
the less you make out of it
life is one big canvas
with brushes aplenty
we all wait to paint the masterpiece
with the colors we want
amidst all this confusion
we look to standout
by standing on someone else
when you think you had enough
step back from this insane world
move into this darkness
take your time
enjoy the beauty
enjoy the silence
and when the time is right
for you to step back in this psychedelic world
you have a million reasons to rejoice
for you have a life full of rainbows
at every step
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according to dictionary.com, psychedelic is defined as: (of a mental state) characterized by intense and distorted perceptions and hallucinations and feelings of euphoria or sometimes despair
http://dictionary.reference.com/search?q=psychedelic
of or causing extreme changes in the conscious mind, as hallucinations, delusions, intensification of awareness and sensory perception, etc. - http://www.yourdictionary.com/psychedelic
My entry to Meerajay's express yourself content #22
note: at first glance, this is one big meaningless poem. but read it again :)
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Thank you Opulence :)
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Thank you Bhiku :)
Good to see you here :)
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A very nice poem. Very apt to the pic :)
Opulence
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Spk100 : Very nice, enjoyed your write up and loved the way you ended this.
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Thank you Muthu :)
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SPK !!
Good one with words played around nicely
thx
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Thank you Uma :)
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Thank you Ether :)
left a comment now :)
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spk, nice take on a nice picture. In the maze of chaos, violence and confusion, the only thing that makes some sense is 'silence'- this aspect brought out very well in your poem . Uma
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Hi spk100
An enjoyable 'psychedelic poem'
BTW Thank you for recommending my poem 'Endless Applause'though you left no comments on the same - Ether
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