a gun shot, a childs cry and a little laughter
a small talk, a big argument and crazy fight
stand...
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a gun shot, a child's cry and a little laughter
a small talk, a big argument and crazy fight
standing patiently
you watch it with amazement
silently wishing for it to stop
yet amazed how stupid everyone can be when
chaos, commotion, violence
take over their sanity
words are violence
the more you talk
the more "insane" you become
the more you try to understand
the less you make out of it
life is one big canvas
with brushes aplenty
we all wait to paint the masterpiece
with the colors we want
amidst all this confusion
we look to standout
by standing on someone else
when you think you had enough
step back from this insane world
move into this darkness
take your time
enjoy the beauty
enjoy the silence
and when the time is right
for you to step back in this psychedelic world
you have a million reasons to rejoice
for you have a life full of rainbows
at every step
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according to dictionary.com, psychedelic is defined as: (of a mental state) characterized by intense and distorted perceptions and hallucinations and feelings of euphoria or sometimes despair
http://dictionary.reference.com/search?q=psychedelic
of or causing extreme changes in the conscious mind, as hallucinations, delusions, intensification of awareness and sensory perception, etc. - http://www.yourdictionary.com/psychedelic
My entry to Meerajay's express yourself content #22
note: at first glance, this is one big meaningless poem. but read it again :)
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wow what a beautiful write indeed...wow great take for the contest
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spk100,
Adifferent angle to the pictures.......... Beautiful innovtion........ I liked it...... thanks for writing a different poem altogether....
words are violence
the more you talk
the more "insane" you become
the more you try to understand
the less you make out of it
Prasad
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when you think you had enough
step back from this insane world
move into this darkness
take your time
enjoy the beauty
enjoy the silence
My funda reflected in your poem.
Yes enjoy the silence.
In that silence
One can hear one's inner voice......
Swayam
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It's beautiful!!
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Very beautiful spk. Short and sweet , conveying a perfect message.
Cheers
Meera
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Very well expressed. Enjoyed it a lot.
Sue
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spk.......
Aruna
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Don't have to read it twice Spk, meaning is well conveyed. Great take on the contest
.All the best
MayaAnil
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spk
meaninglessness is the only thing that makes sense
enjoyed reading it..
reffy
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Good Efforts and Grand show...
Cute ways to bring out all those emotions, longings, observations and experiances.
The power of silence and its soothing effects portrayed beautifully.
Life is full of beautiful garden with all its fragrence and flora.
Walking through its journey, obstacles are like a thorn, that's nature's gift to bring in roses with a thorn in a plant. Roses are pleasent and it is the happiness.
Rainbow of colours again a nature's Gift & God's creations.
Abide by its rules & Watch all those coming across
Be a warrior to fight out evils and bring out those goodness within self and society
Life is full of mysteries and miracles
Explore, Empower, Experiance and Excel
subbu
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