i searched everywhere
from the little shop in the corner of the street
to the big mall in the middle...
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i searched everywhere
from the little shop in the corner of the street
to the big mall in the middle of the city
searching for what was in my mind
a special thing that would be the best choice
for this occasion
a little something that would say what i wanted to say
countless hours of search invain
i couldnt find it
maybe no one else understood it the same way
as i did
maybe they all felt it to be too hard
and too good to be true
i try to write it down
but words that once gushed down
now merely trickled down to nothing
how i wish i could pen down
what i wanted to say
i close my eyes and think about
the stuff that i thought about buying
comparing them to what you once said you wanted
then i realized
there is nothing that can compare
to your sweet smile,
to the love and caring nature
that you so easily emoted at all scenarios
the loving gestures
during the highs and lows
and the gentle words
with the power to calm a beast
i struggle to find the perfect thing
yet the ones i saw
couldnt match up with
all the things that make you "you"
after much struggle,
here it is
from me to you
"Happy Mothers Day"

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note: to all the mom's out there :)
originally posted in my poetry site.
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Thank you Bhavna :)
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ohhh my goshhhh...tatzzzz beautiful... :-)


so vryyy subtle... so vry swttt.. so vry apt... n so wonderfullll.. wowwww... loveddd itttt
these linesss ... excellenttt,,, Mom ,,well defineddd.....
then i realized
there is nothing that can compare
to your sweet smile,
to the love and caring nature
that you so easily emoted at all scenarios
the loving gestures
during the highs and lows
and the gentle words
with the power to calm a beast
rgds
Bhavna
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Thank you Melody Queen :)
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Nice, warm tribute. Nothing can measure up to her love.
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Thank you Bhiku Matre :)
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Spk100: A great write up, the words are very touching.
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Thank you Opulence :)
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A different way of expressing! good poem spk
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Thank you Prasad :)
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Spk 100,
I enjoyed reading the beautiful poem for the mother..................
Prasad
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