i searched everywhere
from the little shop in the corner of the street
to the big mall in the middle...
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i searched everywhere
from the little shop in the corner of the street
to the big mall in the middle of the city
searching for what was in my mind
a special thing that would be the best choice
for this occasion
a little something that would say what i wanted to say
countless hours of search invain
i couldnt find it
maybe no one else understood it the same way
as i did
maybe they all felt it to be too hard
and too good to be true
i try to write it down
but words that once gushed down
now merely trickled down to nothing
how i wish i could pen down
what i wanted to say
i close my eyes and think about
the stuff that i thought about buying
comparing them to what you once said you wanted
then i realized
there is nothing that can compare
to your sweet smile,
to the love and caring nature
that you so easily emoted at all scenarios
the loving gestures
during the highs and lows
and the gentle words
with the power to calm a beast
i struggle to find the perfect thing
yet the ones i saw
couldnt match up with
all the things that make you "you"
after much struggle,
here it is
from me to you
"Happy Mothers Day"

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note: to all the mom's out there :)
originally posted in my poetry site.
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Thanks ObscuritySpeaks.
I guess, if the ending is changed a bit, it could suit anyone.
nope, my mom doesnt get to read this :)
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hey Spk,
later when i reading the end i was touched... very nice poem.. loved it!!
i didn't notice the pic towards the end and the tag.. kept reading the poem and thot you had written it for your gf..
did your mom read it btw? If not, show it to her right away. She'll love it too!!
cheers n love
OS
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Thank you Swayam :)
Welcome back :)
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Thank you Sudha :)
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Thank you Ajit :)
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i struggle to find the perfect thing
yet the ones i saw
couldnt match up with
all the things that make you "you"
Yes, very true.....Spend two days in gloom after coming back from vacation thinking about mom and Papa.......Felt so lonely......Their presence itself gives a lot of moral boost up
Swayam
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Hey Spk,
That is a wonderful poem, very beautifully written,
- Sudha
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a real tribute to mother ...good one
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Thank you Viv :)
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Spk100,
Beautiful and so very accurate.
Viv
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