Look what you have done

May 8 2008  | Views 313 |  Comments  (30)
Sitting down in the middle of the bed i look up i look down i look to the right to the left waking... Expand

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  spk100 posted 3 mnths ago

No no.. this is def not a blame game :) and not at all intended in that way in any sense.

only 4 lines are indicative of that. but rest of the lines are not directed in that way :)

While i do agree on the fear part, at the time of writing this, that was the only thing in mind. black mail, confusion etc... arent part of this one :)

ofcourse the way one reads it defines the meaning :)



  spk100 posted 3 mnths ago

Yes Blood Lime

that song was the inspiration to this one. but in a way its not the same while at times it is at certain lines :)

Lets just say the painting at this moment (personally) is only one view :)



  Meera San posted 3 mnths ago

The way I see it... 
Well... it reads like blame game to me - which would go no where, but in circles - fear, bully - emotional black mail - causing confusions, disturbing behaviors... well insanity! A powerless idiot would do that... else they would get into proactive action...wouldn't they?

well... yea. I guess one can get deeper into this... :)



  blood_lime posted 3 mnths ago

r u sure this one has only one meaning? ot it could be like watching a painting from both sides.

I followed the title coz it reminded me of a song 'look wat u've done' and I'd say those lines had somekinda weary similar fear :
 
Take my photo off the wall
If it just won't sing for you
'Cause all that's left has gone away
And there's nothing there for you to prove

Give me back my point of view
'Cause I just can't think for you
I can hardly hear you say
What should I do, well you choose

Oh, look what you've done
You've made a fool of everyone
Oh well, it seems likes such fun
Until you lose what you had won



And that is ... a lovely picture ...



  spk100 posted 3 mnths ago

Thank you Maddss :)



  spk100 posted 3 mnths ago

Thank you Nupur :)

a lot depends on this.. yep, a lot :)



  spk100 posted 3 mnths ago

Thank you Meera :)

insanity full throttle? could be or could be not.. :)



  maddss123 posted 3 mnths ago

Thats a good one man!  i liked it!!

regards



  keyaa1 posted 3 mnths ago

spk

yes this has only meaning....

but it is not as simple as it looks ..it is deceptive in its simplicity...a lot depends on this

keep writing

Nupur



  Meera San posted 3 mnths ago

note: a simple no nonsense piece of writing that has absolutely only one meaning :)


Insanity full throttle? :))))))))))))

Well, thanks for the note, I didn't have to re-read and try to *get* it :))

Meera





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